Comments on: A Spring Morning…. http://www.vedainformatics.com/veranda/a-spring-morning/ A place where we meet and chat Thu, 09 Feb 2012 01:47:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Dax http://www.vedainformatics.com/veranda/a-spring-morning/#comment-979 Dax Tue, 09 Feb 2010 07:34:12 +0000 http://www.vedainformatics.com/veranda/?p=1673#comment-979 My spring mornings begin when I take the bike off the stand and hear the predictable creaks and groans from the bike's 20-year old suspension system. Some of my spring mornings begin with a leak. Followed by a part of my mind always keeping the escaping oil in mind on the subsequent drive. Personal to Hammad: "It took only few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference. " [Did you open the window before ogling insects, you forgot to mention it, perhaps?] My spring mornings begin when I take the bike off the stand and hear the predictable creaks and groans from the bike’s 20-year old suspension system. Some of my spring mornings begin with a leak. Followed by a part of my mind always keeping the escaping oil in mind on the subsequent drive.

Personal to Hammad: “It took only few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference. ” [Did you open the window before ogling insects, you forgot to mention it, perhaps?]

]]> By: Swapna http://www.vedainformatics.com/veranda/a-spring-morning/#comment-974 Swapna Fri, 05 Feb 2010 08:01:18 +0000 http://www.vedainformatics.com/veranda/?p=1673#comment-974 My thoughts on each of the descriptions: Loved Palash's first spring morning description, particularly the visual imagery he created by referring to the beetles, the praying mantis and the ' Bee-Queen summoning her army of lecherous male bees.' I think the imagery was really brilliant. Hammad and Raji had simple spring morning descriptions. Their description is simple, warm and manages to strike the right chord in the reader. Ankit's 'freshly minted sunshine' just brightens up the day altogether. The season of blooming is how Vidya describes a Spring Morning and yes, it definitely is the right expression. The hint of longing and waiting makes the Spring Morning worth seeing as evident in Romila's lines while Priya's description infuses a newfound high. I would have loved to read spring morning descriptions from Debolena, Arunesh and Saurav too. My thoughts on each of the descriptions:

Loved Palash’s first spring morning description, particularly the visual imagery he created by referring to the beetles, the praying mantis and the ‘ Bee-Queen summoning her army of lecherous male bees.’ I think the imagery was really brilliant.

Hammad and Raji had simple spring morning descriptions. Their description is simple, warm and manages to strike the right chord in the reader.

Ankit’s ‘freshly minted sunshine’ just brightens up the day altogether.

The season of blooming is how Vidya describes a Spring Morning and yes, it definitely is the right expression. The hint of longing and waiting makes the Spring Morning worth seeing as evident in Romila’s lines while Priya’s description infuses a newfound high.

I would have loved to read spring morning descriptions from
Debolena, Arunesh and Saurav too.

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